If I were 1cm tall. I will have to ride flea to school.A butterfly will be a dragon and a bath will be a sea! If I was 1cm tall I will be as screachy as can be.You may want to look under your shoe for there I may be.It would take me 50 years to eat my dinner.A mouse hole will be a mansion.I will climb on to a bird to get to place to place.Dog poo would really stink!A fish would be a whale!It will take me 100 years to write a poem and that is true for I am 1cm tall.
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Akomanga2020 
Billie, I love your imaginative take on this poem!
STAR: You have rhymed your words, which is really tricky, and used onomatopoeia- screachy.
STAR: You have used vivid imagery to really paint a picture in the reader’s mind. A butterfly as a dragon is very dramatic.
WISH: Next time, we need to learn how to set it out as a poem on a computer, so that you can see the structure of your rhyme.
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