If I was 1mm tall. By Alfie

If  I  was  1mm  tall  I  would  ride  an  ant  to  school  and  I  might  not  even  go  to  school  because  I  might  be  too small  for somebody  to see me.  I  can  hardly  write  that  why  I  took  5  years  to  write  this  much  and  if  you  were  1mm  tall  you  could  under  the  doors!  And  you  could  rod  anything  you  wane  and  be  evevy  good  at  had and seek!

One thought on “If I was 1mm tall. By Alfie

  1. Alfie, I really like the way you have included details and thought about what might happen if you were really small. You have used some punctuation and checked some of your words. Your next step is to check all of your words using a dictionary or even spell check on the computer. Tino pai!
    Whāea Vashti

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