If i was one centermeter tall by Eva

March 8, 2020March 14, 2020 / akuakomanga

if i was one centermeter tall i would be able to ride my sister home . A giants tear would be my swimming pool. It would take me two weeks to go to the toilet and will take me two hours to eat dinner. If i wanted honey i would fall in.it took me one year to write this poem.

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whaeavashti

March 14, 2020 at 10:46 pm

Eva, I love your ideas!
STAR: I like the idea of a giant’s tear as a swimming pool.
STAR: You have used capital letters and full stops.
WISH: Can you check if there is a red line under some words? You can use an online spell checker to help correct words like centimeter.

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