Please read Torrance’s Recount. Great job Torrance! You put a lot of effort into editing your work.

Down at the beach we went surfing. We also went fishing. I caught two snapper- one was 50cm. And then I went back surfing. We also went diving. We got some kina. And then I went back surfing. I caught five more waves. And then my parents said time to go. Then we had smoked fish and kina.