Please read Torrance’s Recount. Great job Torrance! You put a lot of effort into editing your work.
Down at the beach we went surfing. We also went fishing. I caught two snapper- one was 50cm. And then I went back surfing. We also went diving. We got some kina. And then I went back surfing. I caught five more waves. And then my parents said time to go. Then we had smoked fish and kina.
Akomanga2020 
Wow! Well done to Torrance! I’m very jealous. I need to go surfing again. I’d also love some seafood! Great work on editing the spelling and giving us more detail, Torrance!
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Awesome Torrance! Maybe one day you can teach me how to surf!
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Tino pai Torrance,
I am feeling extremely hungry now after reading about all that smoked fish and kina. YUMMY!
You did many activities with your family. I love surfing but always get tumbled over and gasp for breath. Us kids used to call the white foam after the waves crashed around us : “MONEY!”and splash each other with it, as if we were swimming in money like Scrooge McDuck! One day my home-made surf board (thanks Dad) winded me in the stomach – YOUCH! (I cried ALOT!).
Ka kite!
Mrs P.T.
P.S. Great spelling.
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