IF I WAS 1 MILER METER TALL! By Evie.

/ akuakomanga

If i was 1 miller meter tall, I’d ride to school in the underground tunnel of the ancient ants.

I would have a giant woffie thing who would share his bowl with me.

He said it was a water bowl, but I say I’ts a swimming pool.

I would struggle a lot to do my school work.

My talk would be a whisper, my shout would be a talk to us.

For I would be my mini mighty self, I If was 1 millimetre tall!

2 thoughts on “IF I WAS 1 MILER METER TALL! By Evie.”

  1. I love the way you have added more detail and included alliteration in your poem. You have used lines and verses to organise your writing. You have used interesting vocabulary, and your punctuation is almost totally correct! You also edited your writing to correct your spelling. Next step is to use the spelling tool on the laptop to also help with editing. Great work, Tino pai!

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